A review of common college student writing flaws --
including the issue of incorrect word usage.
by Randall S. Hansen, Ph.D., and Katharine Hansen, Ph.D.
Little Evidence of Research.
Inserting quotations, citing authors that bolster your thesis, and presenting
a lengthy-but-pertinent bibliography will all help show your professor that you've
research your topic well, assuming that you have, in fact, gathered sufficient
research material. But evidence of copious research will succeed only if you
use the research you've uncovered in a way that logically supports your thesis.
Thus, the lack-of-evidence writing flaw is intricately tied to the
failure-to-support-thesis flaw, as well as the poor-organization flaw.
Remember that your professor can give you the best guidance on how much
research you need to do. Check in with your instructor as you're researching
and writing your paper, and share your research with him or her. Your teacher
can probably tell you whether the research seems adequate.
Integrating the research into the paper is trickier. A good rule of thumb is to cite
at least one source per paragraph in the body of your paper (not counting the
introduction or conclusion, since these paragraphs are your opinions).
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college level for more than 15 years.
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is a former speechwriter and college instructor who provides content for several of our sites, including
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career counselors, and students. She is author of Dynamic Cover Letter for New Graduates; A Foot in the Door: Networking Your
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and Write Your Way to a Higher GPA, all published by Ten Speed Press.
She can be reached by e-mail at kathy@quintcareers.com.
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