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Poor or Nonexistent Transitions.

The best writers know that you must guide the reader of your paper by connecting key points as you make your argument. A common flaw for inexperienced writers is not connecting the paragraphs in their papers, resulting in a lack of flow. A key to improving flow is improving your paper's organization and consciously adding transitional elements between paragraphs.

Poor or nonexistent transitions slow the reader when your goal with writing should be convey information clearly and concisely, convincing the reader of your thesis and supporting arguments. Test your transitions by reading your paper aloud to determine whether each paragraph flows coherently from the proceeding paragraph.

There are any number of transitionary words and phrases to assist you, including:

• Sequence: again, also, and, besides, finally, first, second, third, furthermore, moreover, next, in addition to.
• Time: after a bit, a few days later, afterward, before, earlier, formerly, meanwhile, now, presently, simultaneously.
• Similarity/Comparison: again, also, likewise, similarly, in addition, equally important.
• Contrast: although, despite, in contrast, on the other hand, regardless, whereas, conversely.
• Empahsis: even, indeed, in fact, of course, truly.
• Result/Cause and Effect: accordingly, consequently, hence, so, therefore, thus.
• Place: above, adjacent, below, beyond, closer, farther, nearby, opposite to.
• Concession: although it's true that, in any event, it may appear that.
• Additional Support/Evidence: additionally, again, also, and, as well, besides, equally important, further, furthermore, in addition, moreover.
• Summary: finally, above all, as has been noted, in other words, in short, on the whole, therefore, accordingly, consequently, for these reasons, hence, in summary, in conclusion, in the final analysis, to sum up, ultimately.

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