A review of common college student writing flaws --
including the overuse of passive voice.
by Randall S. Hansen, Ph.D., and Katharine Hansen, Ph.D.
Overuse of Passive Voice.
A passive verb is always a verb phrase consisting of a form of the verb to be
followed by a past participle. The subject of an active verb acts, while the subject
of a passive verb is acted upon.
Using the passive voice can create an awkward sentence, and the overuse of it
in a paper can cause your writing to become flat and uninteresting. Active voice
is a much stronger form of writing.
Once you understand and can identify the passive voice, making changes in
your writing from passive to active are fairly easy.
From our vague pronoun example above:
Wrong: Many of the area residents were thrilled by this event.
Right: This event thrilled many of the area residents.
Go to the next common college student writing flaw:
Weak
Vocabulary or Overuse of Jargon/Buzzwords.
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Dr. Randall S. Hansen, CEO of EmpoweringSites.com, has been empowering people his
entire adult life -- to help them better their lives. In fact, empowerment is part of his professional
philosophy statement. He is also founder of
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as well as a published author, with several books, chapters in books, and hundreds
of articles. He's often quoted in the media and conducts
empowering workshops around the country. Hansen is also an educator, having taught at the
college level for more than 15 years.
Dr. Katharine Hansen, Creative Director of EmpoweringSites.com,
is a former speechwriter and college instructor who provides content for several of our sites, including
Quintessential Careers,
MyCollegeSuccessStory.com, and
EnhanceMyVocabulary.com. She also edits
QuintZine, an electronic newsletter for job-seekers,
career counselors, and students. She is author of Dynamic Cover Letter for New Graduates; A Foot in the Door: Networking Your
Way into the Hidden Job Market; and, with Randall S. Hansen, Ph.D., Dynamic Cover Letters
and Write Your Way to a Higher GPA, all published by Ten Speed Press.
She can be reached by e-mail at kathy@quintcareers.com.
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